DOWN OUR STREET

The narrow street is as it always was,

its uneven pavements cracked and untended

patchy grass bordering its crumbling edges.

Frayed ropes still hang from bowed lamp posts

and tired gardens still hide behind struggling hedges.

Apologetic paths lead to faded front doors

while sightless windows, opaque and unblinking,

blank the flat stares of those walking past. 

 

Back alleys, bordered by old chestnut fencing,

lead to coal holes, dust bins and ramshackled sheds,

infested cabbages grow in straight rows

next to onions and carrots in weedling beds.

Nondescript chickens scuff up the dust,

bored yard dogs rattle their chains,

while sad rabbits, in undersized hutches

live out their lives, empty-minded, deranged.

 

 Children's voices echo from grey-gravelled houses,

mothers still call, chiding sons who are late,

then fuss over daughters in tarty frilled blouses,

as they stub out their fag ends on black leaded grates.

Fathers still bind their trousers with string

as, on creaking push bikes, they labour to work.

Good wives in turbans mangle and wring

cursing as buttons fall from good Sunday shirts. 

 

'Harbottles' stands at the top of the road

serving the estate with all of its needs,

sugar and carrots - black treacle - tea,

Woodbines - firelighters and processed green peas.

Small sticky children with round hopeful eyes

stare lovingly - longingly - at Lyons Fruit Pies.

Post Ofice gossips cash Family Allowance

then go to the CO-OP. to shop for their stamps.

                                        

                                                     The Street hasn't changed -

                                                           - it lives on in my mind -

                                                                   - the sights and the sounds -

                                                                            - the smells and the grind.

 

 

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Flyntland

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 15:42

Thank you so much to Aisha and to Greg. Flowers mean a lot to me - thank you for them.

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Flyntland

Sun 2nd Feb 2025 14:26

RBK. Tom and Hugh, also Yanma, Marla, and Naomi,
Thank you all for kindly reading and clicking on a flower.

Thank you, Stephen, I really appreciate your comment,
My memories probably started when I was about 5 years old, the war was just about over and I was becoming aware of the road outside our gate. Poverty and shabbiness were normal to us all, we knew nothing different. In retrospect, I do not know how anyone managed to bring up a family on what was available to them.
Not 'The good old days'

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd Feb 2025 08:40

A really impressive poem, Flyntland. It has echoes of my chlldhood, and that of my parents, I suspect. I can just remember those old East End streets which, later, I only knew as a view from a train. But the rabbits and the Co-op stamps are very familiar.
Thanks for this.

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