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While you face the past

Your ass faces the future.

Turn around quickly!

 

©Larisa Rzhepishevska




 

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 11th Jun 2024 12:13

Thank you Tim Higbee for commenting.
With best wishes, Larisa

Tim Higbee

Mon 10th Jun 2024 17:20

Follow not where the ass shall lead. It has a shitty perspective.
Loved the haiku! So many connotations could be applied.
Thanks for the humor.😋

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David RL Moore

Mon 10th Jun 2024 14:41

That's great Larisa,

As I said it could be, not that it was. I suppose it was a poor anglo-saxon attempt at humour.

Not at all my fantasy, rather a possible application of your words.

Maybe this is a good example of things being lost in translation, nevermind.

At least it was a comment eh.

Thanks for your response.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 10th Jun 2024 13:31

Dear, Sunshine! Thank you for your nice comment, and thank you for understanding humor. Best wishes, Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 10th Jun 2024 13:28

I am sorry to say, David, but my haiku has nothing to do with Russian proverb. It's your fantasy. More than that, it has nothing to do with Russian leadership. When I was writing this haiku I thought about the form.

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David RL Moore

Mon 10th Jun 2024 11:58

This could be an old Russian proverb although if it is it seems the current Russian leadership missed the memo.

David

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Sunshine

Mon 10th Jun 2024 07:17

This is damn hilarious but kind of true. Good sense of "arssistic" humour indeed. Lolz 😂

Note* the word arssistic has no meaning and is randomly used.

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