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Miss doubtful 🤩

Should I pen down feelings true

Venting emotions anew

Words spilled on paper for you


Should I share thoughts within

Keeping them locked isn't a sin

Painting Canvas with letters to begin


Should I let the tears roll down

Smudging make-up, making a clown

Else oceans of pain will make me drown


Should I vent out pent-up anger 

Either let it spread within like cancer,

Or letting emotional magma to meander


Should I suppress sorrows and grief

Friendly hugs could give hearts relief

Strengthening trust and spiritual belief


Should I dance and sing with joy

Although I'm a little coy

But what's the harm if we enjoy





◄ Ghazala Lari - an ode to myself 🤪

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Ghazala lari

Thu 14th Dec 2023 05:38

Thank you M.C and Stephen 😊💐

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Dec 2023 09:06

A really fine poem, Ghazala. Written with delicacy and, as MC says, firm rhythm and rhyme.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 2nd Dec 2023 14:57

I like the tight rhythm of these lines and the general consistency
of rhyme that maintains the interest, not least with the upbeat
ending that ends the piece. Thank you.

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