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Into My Past

Into my past, I very often delve and dip.
And I think about you on my every trip.
I love the past more than the present day.
But the past is just that and is there to stay.
So, I'm just content to go down memory lane.
And when I'm there, I'll call out your name.
If you see or hear me, please send me a sign.
A Robin or white weather, will do just fine.
Or you can also send rainbows for me to see.
Have you already, as so far today I've seen 3!

(for my Mum on the 2nd anniversary of her passing xx)

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Mike Bartram

Wed 15th Nov 2023 15:22

Thank you very much for your kind comments x

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John Gilbert Ellis

Mon 6th Nov 2023 17:28

'I love the past more than the present day' is an intriguing line.

I to have similar feelings for my Mum who sends messages through Robins and other creatures.

Tim Higbee

Mon 6th Nov 2023 16:34

I like the feelings and images your words invoke. Memory Lane is such a mysterious place. It has the power to reconnect in so many ways. My grandfather passed back in 1973 and I wrote down thoughts of eroding time as a dedication to him. He too lives on Memory Lane. Thank you for my recent visit there.

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