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Returning home on the Flying Scotsman 1983

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Wrapped securely within your liveried green

Refined golden-arched nameplate highlights your pedigree,

London North Eastern returning home

Non-stop, Kings Cross to Diesel City

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

Passing by Highbury, the Arsenal

through the long Potters Bar tunnel

Where pressure causes your ears to pop

Travelling quicker northward, abandoning the ‘Smoke,’

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

Country air chills flushing my cheeks red

Too close to the door’s open window,

The many-faceted shades of country green

merge in blinding speed to just one hue

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

I get bearings from station name plaques that whizz by

No sooner has one station pinpointed my location 

When accompanied by Doppler’s sound effect, another hurtles past

Stevenage, Hitchen, Biggleswade, Sandy, St Neots, Huntingdon.

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

North, straight flight, javelin like 

Soon I recognise vistas. I’m nearly home. 

Abandoned brick pits awaiting development

Hapless football ground, KFC, Cathedral,

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

Slowly, then finally, we come to rest

Handle gripped, determinedly turned

I step onto the raised tarmacked platform. 

Ticket in hand for inspection.

Peeeeeeeeeeeeeeep blows the conductor

Clackety,      Click,      Clackety,      Click,      Clackety,      Click

Heads turn as this famous steam chariot

slowly pulls from our station, bound for York,

Billowed smoke and hot air, follow in a hazed wake

Wheeled Hermes, I thank you for my safe return. 

Clackety Click, Clackety Click, Clackety Click

reflected nostalgia

◄ Bliss

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 1st Jun 2023 08:01

Thanks, JD. A bit like a souped-up Whitsun Weddings (without the weddings). A fine, evocative ride.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 31st May 2023 09:33

Thanks JD.
I wonder just how much of the original there is left after countless "restoration" jobs?
And how many steam engineers / craftsmen are there still working who are capable of carrying out such work?
From time to time, a magnificent sight on the East Lancs Railway.
https://www.eastlancsrailway.org.uk/about-us/the-flying-scotsman-at-elr/

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John Coopey

Wed 31st May 2023 09:02

Very evocative, JD. Its whistle is very distinctive, like a cracked copper kettle. One of my own recollections of train travel was being unable not to watch the mesmerizing rise and fall of the trackside telephone wires. Are they still there or has technology seen their demise?

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Russell Jacklin

Wed 31st May 2023 08:39

thank you, Bethany,

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Bethany Sallis

Tue 30th May 2023 22:03

JD you have put me in first class!

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