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Funfair

It used to be the highlight of our year;

Big dipper rides plunged down into a void,

For just one moment blanking out the world,

With all its boredom and unuttered cares.

Among the larks and games and candy floss,

The funfair has a feeling of escape.

At first, war seemed the same: a chance to swap

The daily skin for something bright and new.

So here we are, but no one wants us here,

And given half a chance would gun us down

Or slit our throats without a second’s thought.

I try friendship, but the anger in their eyes

Tells me not to. Above, a big wheel turns,

Deep in the dark night sky, ripe for evil.

Ukraine

◄ 'Well, you know'

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Dec 2022 08:26

Thanks, John. Yes, and the post-war world offered up so many possibilities for people like Spike. By coincidence, my dad was once on the same troop ship as Milligan and remembered him doing sketches and playing music to entertain the troops. A lot of his material came from war experiences, of course.

And thanks to Tom, Jennifer, Rudyard and Holden

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John Coopey

Tue 13th Dec 2022 23:13

I remember Spike Milligan saying that although the war was the most dreadful experience for so many, for him it was the best time of his life. He was one of the lucky ones who enjoyed the funfair.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Dec 2022 16:48

Thank you, John Yes, I think that war can change people, and sometimes, if they are lucky, for the better (often for the worse, of course!) . When my dad went into the army in 1939 he was a factory labourer; he came out as a civil servant. However, it is a mistake to join a war expecting it to improve your lot, because disappointment is just round the corner.

And thanks to New Shoes, Uilleam, Bethany, Flyntland and Hélène.

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John Botterill

Sun 11th Dec 2022 23:43

A very neat analogy both familiar and terrifying. We sometimes welcome change, as your protagonist does, and then regret the consequences. Terrific poem. Great! 💪

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