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Scrapheap

So many lives, so many hopes and dreams,

They all finish loaded on the scrapheap,

Piled high into one moist organic hump,

Where, some decades later, the needy poor

Will hollow out hovels to dodge the cold,

And some bright spark will soon call it recycling

And trumpet this sham as sustainable.

Then celebrities will come, and sleep out,

In self-pleasuring solidarity,

And clowns and acrobats will entertain.

Every ten years, someone will remember

To commemorate the originals

With speeches, boy bands and an archbishop,

And all will dance, trying not to disturb

The destitute, still hiding in their holes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 18th Dec 2022 21:06

My thanks to Nigel, Julie, Rudyard, Pete, John, Hélène and Leon for liking this poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Dec 2022 16:25

Thank you Rose, Graham and Flyntland for your generous comments. I think that you have honed in on the central point of this poem, probably better than I did.

I am not completely cynical about celebrities, as many do a lot of good work. I'm just a bit suspicious of the check-list process (footballer, woman from TV antiques programme, minor royal, comedian who isn't funny, etc). I'm glad that you all enjoyed this write.

And thanks to Keith for liking.

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Flyntland

Thu 15th Dec 2022 10:08

Exposing hypocracy - well done.
Those who do impact the lives of the needy do so silently without bragging,

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 14th Dec 2022 22:43

Celebrities always seem to want recognition for their attempts to advertise charitable work. Smoke and mirrors explain it perfectly. Another 'Great Gospage' piece here Stephen. Well done!

G

PS: I think I might have inadvertently coined a new genre.

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Wed 14th Dec 2022 22:17

I had just logged off Stephen but I had a very good reason for logging back on straight way and that reason was for having seen this gem of yours-yes!

those flash-in-the pan rememberances and for me celebrities in charity appeals are a definite no no-too cheesily false most of them. Really enjoyed this poem-11/10! 👍




Rose 💋

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