in/out

one day I woke up
tired of taking the oxygen in my lungs for granted

so now I breathe
deliberately
and as I breathe

so I live

 

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keith jeffries

Mon 8th Aug 2022 18:00

A great deal can be taken from this brief poem as it lends itself to a myriad of thoughts. The word appreciation comes into my mind along with a certain realisation of how we should live.
A good piece of work.
Thank you for this
Keith

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