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All my life I have heard their sound

But they rejected the want of me

My unfading desire to see

I the father. It was never meant to be 

 

We had each other, desires abound 

Still, they rejected both you and me

My unfading desire to see

I the father. Was never meant to be 

 

We tried, we cried, in tears, our love drowned

I rejected you, they still rejected me

My unfading desire continued to be

I the father. I was never meant to see

 

Finally, I gave up, moved on, uncrowned

I rejected them as they rejected me

My unfading desire to be

I the father. I never ever would see

 

But then life u-turned around

Rejection was no longer a concern to me

You invited me to be and see

I the step-father. I was sure it was to be 

 

And then I heard the special sound

No longer rejected they completed me

Finally my desire to see

I the grandfather. A swelling heart inside of me 

 

Our trio now break our silent sound

I have so much love for all and each

Finally my chance to cajole and teach

Life’s hopes and joys are within my reach

◄ Paul and Art’s  ‘B’ Side to Mrs Robinson

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John Botterill

Sat 11th Jun 2022 10:25

Tells a very familiar story very skilfully, Russell. Bravo!

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keith jeffries

Thu 9th Jun 2022 09:39

A poem of generational change and ultimate joy. Also a poem of recollection and life's impact on the soul.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 9th Jun 2022 09:02

Thank you, everyone, you are very kind

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Wed 8th Jun 2022 22:56

Life isn't all plain sailing for sure. I read somewhere that if we could actually hear the global voices of rejection, the sound would be explosively and piercingly LOUD!!!!!😞

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Wed 8th Jun 2022 20:44

a very nice albeit sad but still an enjoyable read Russell

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