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The tenderness of you

Put aside a kiss for me

A solid state embrace

Not just a cheek by jowl shake down brush

With someone who could not care less

That is not what I want

I want to feel the tenderness of you

Pressed against that which is mine

To push away the crushed flower tears

And stagnant powdered scent of vapid breath

 

I want to feel the warmth of the love

That has for so often been promised

Let me feel again the rush

Of flushed and trammelled blood

Across my cheeks

Rising from the depths from that has lain

Dormant

All but dead

 

So put away your words of solace

And strung out cut the quick smiles

Be not a stranger

Help unravel my tangled soul

And make me feel alive once again

Put aside your wasted semaphore crosses

Marked on infrequently sent missives

And give me the hoped-for embrace

For which I so much need

Take me in your arms again

And hold me for eternity

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Martin Elder

Mon 28th Jun 2021 22:01

Thanks for reading and commenting Keith
Bless you my friend

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keith jeffries

Wed 23rd Jun 2021 09:36

"Put aside your wasted semaphore crosses". Martin, that line alone encapsulates so much of today's false affections. Has love become a perfunctory touch as you say in the first three lines? A poem which speaks of a world where, even to show true affection, has escaped us. A peck on the check and the words "I love you" have become devalued currency. Internet affection???

Thank you for this. A poem which has needed to be written for some time.

Keith

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Martin Elder

Wed 23rd Jun 2021 07:38

Thanks to Nigel Stephen Kimberly and Holden for the likes
and thanks to Hazel for commenting .

My feeling behind this is that we all need to be embraced and to feel we are being embraced at times. Even more so over the last twelve months and more. We have taken the feeling of touch for granted in the past

Thanks again

Martin

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 21st Jun 2021 10:57

Touching - as in I feel touched. Perhaps that's all we can ask for?

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