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CHEEKY MONKEY

Oh you cheeky little monkey why you sitting in that tree

Dangling my car key and laughing loud at me

A daytrip to safari park and stepped out for a pee

You saw that golden moment when you snatched away my key

For you knew that I'd be busy with my little twinkle dee

Well just you wait my time will come

When you jump down and I smack your bum

For you will get such a shock

When in my hand the key will pop

oh you cheeky little monkey sitting in your tree

You sure wont take the P...  OUT OF ME !!

 

 

◄ QUESTION AND ANSWER

LIFE'S PUZZLE ►

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Lynn Dye

Wed 14th Jul 2010 21:53

Bernadette, thank you kind comments on "Friendship". Enjoy your visit from your friend and will catch you later. Lynn xx
P.S. I shall even forgive you for calling me Ann TWICE!! LOL.

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Bernadette Herbertson

Wed 14th Jul 2010 17:41

Hi ann thanks for your comment glad you like . This one just came into my head earlier so with pen and paper to hand I wrote it down and posted it xx

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Bernadette Herbertson

Wed 14th Jul 2010 17:36

Thanks Stef for noticing the horrific language and animal abuse thought that might shock you and as for the good spanking well Steffie boy what can I say but ooh la la !! xx

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Bernadette Herbertson

Wed 14th Jul 2010 17:31

thanks Jayne for noticing my using 2 'yours ' it was a mistake. I have corrected it now. glad you liked it ..Bernadette

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Lynn Dye

Wed 14th Jul 2010 16:56

Amusing and cute, Bernadette, love it! xx

<Deleted User> (8464)

Wed 14th Jul 2010 16:09

This is a cheeky little poem. It's really quite sweet in its humour. May I suggest removing one of the 'your's from line 7?

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 14th Jul 2010 14:00

This poem is shocking and disgraceful-horrific language-and animal abuse-haha! I might nick your keys-I fancy a damn good spanking...Funny poem Herbychops-lotsalerv-Stef-xx

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