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Don’t Cry

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Don’t cry because it’s gone, 
Smile because it happened, 
The world already has too many tears,
Let lingering smiles, 
On faces be fashioned, 
For the stories we wrote through this passage of years, 
Let songs wring with voices,
Of pleasure and pride, 
For all of our journeys on this rocky road, 
And know that our choices, 
Were made with each stride,
As we took the strain and shouldered our load,
And one more step forward is better than none,
So take every step with pride and passion, 
And remember these words as you push on through, 
Don’t ’t cry because it’s gone, 
Smile because it happened, 
And most of all smile because it happened to you.

◄ Dumbstruck

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 16th Jan 2021 22:15

Thank you so much Aviva and Keith, I genuinely don't know what to say. Such high praise, and honestly, I genuinely wasn't sure about this one, I nearly deleted it because I didn't think I was getting it right. And yes, you are of course right Aviva, there are plenty of things in life that make us cry because they happened and smile because they're gone, but over all, looking back on a life, good and bad, it's still better than not living at all. On balance I think that's probably right. We're tough, us humans, I think that's why we value meaning above all else. Only love comes close and to be fair, that's because it’s the most meaningful thing of all. Thank you both so much. ❤

J. x

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 16th Jan 2021 16:02

You are truly a phenomenal talent. The very first poem i saw of yours reminded me of 'If' and I couldn't quite work out why, it just did... But though that might be a lifetime aspiration to ever write something so profound, you confound me writing poem after poem each one exactly at that level.

In this case, I can't completely agree with the sentiment because sometimes it is the other way around, and you cry because of what happened but smile because it is gone. Either way, as often as possible tears should be left in the past and happiness clung to for the present.

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keith jeffries

Sat 16th Jan 2021 13:18

A poem with a special quality from a voice which needs to be heard. I particularly like the last three lines.
Thank you for this

Keith

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