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Spring meets summer

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I want to wake up in the morning before the dawn

And watch when spring dressed in the beautiful gown

Passes its crown to summer.

I want to open my door wide

And watch when summer as a bride

Excepts her sisters' presents.

And then I wish to walk with summer to the forest

And as a lyrist to watch the summers colors gamma,

To drink the freshest water from a spring,

To listen to the nightingales sing,

To feel myself as in a fairy tale

And have the greatest wish to sail

In the ocean of beauty and dreams

Feeling the warmth of tender sunbeams.

I won’t forget to set my sail before the sunset

And put my dreams into the poem

For you to take our life with charm and wisdom,

To know how much our life is a winsome.



Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

 

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Andy N

Fri 25th Jun 2010 08:11

Enjoyed this, Larisa.. I am not particularly keen on the use of the word winsome at the end of the piece, but there is a lot of images i love in this..

You may want to check our my poem 'Perfect Place' which is among my sample poems, as that's similar to this in places I think!

Otherwise, top banana (In English - nice one!) x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 24th Jun 2010 20:28

Thank you, my dear Lynn.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 24th Jun 2010 20:23

Lovely poem, Larisa, well done.

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