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Reeling

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Clouds

lazy drifting

shape shifting

rain gifting

spirits lifting

 

Sky

gulls wheeling

world ceiling

vast feeling

mind reeling

 

Space

planets sailing

comets trailing

stars failing

chaos prevailing?

 

Beyond Space

order reigning

reality maintaining

never waning

always remaining

 

love training

 

◄ Ten into Five

Restlessness ►

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Andy N

Fri 25th Jun 2010 08:13

Very good, Dave.. I like the use of stripped down language in this poem - works really well..

Btw - on your topic of 'thing we don't write about' - i have wrote a poem following on in part from the themes off that piece.. gonna post it up shortly (it is dedicated to you)

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Lynn Dye

Thu 24th Jun 2010 20:34

I love this too...

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Isobel

Thu 24th Jun 2010 20:24

I like this one Dave. You capture the wonder of looking beyond earth, perfectly. Once you get beyond the clouds, it's awesome, it's scary - it makes you realise just how insignificant you are. The only hope we have is the 'Beyond Space' bit...

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 24th Jun 2010 19:49

It's very nice! I love it. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Cate Greenlees

Thu 24th Jun 2010 19:42

How lovely! Logged on specially to say so!
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