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Mourner

 

That’s him.

Sitting near the back,

Mingling now.

Working the room.

Paying his respects,

Probing for defects

In everybody’s armour.

A proper little charmer.

◄ Euphemisms for Love

Border Guard ►

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Dec 2020 17:35

Very helpful to see all your reactions in the comments. It gives me a new, and very interesting, view of the poem.

Thanks to everyone, and for the likes as well.

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John Coopey

Sat 12th Dec 2020 23:15

Nice understatement, Stephen. It leaves each of us the licence to picture what it is about.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 12th Dec 2020 21:10

Working the room with a will
Not wishing a living soul ill...? ?
Agree with Philipos. Leaving some interesting conjecture in its wake.

Philipos

Sat 12th Dec 2020 18:48


Interesting one Stephen - leaving the reader to wonder what else.

P

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