My promise to you.

If I invite you in and offer friendship.

As your path through life has you passing by.

If I open my arms to embrace you.

And express a love you cannot deny.

If I offer you a strong and broad shoulder.

On which you can lay your weary head,

And let out a long, relieving, cry.

If I comfort your heart and soul.

And with your needs, and desires, I do comply.

If I offer you advice, and opinions.

And convince you, that on me, you can rely.

If I can do these things for you.

Can you do these things for me?

If you can, I promise you a friendship,

And a love for you.

That will never, ever, die.

 

By JD Bardo

◄ Alone

My Kindred Spirit ►

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J.D. Bardo

Sun 6th Dec 2020 17:31

Thank-you all who commented, and left likes, When I try to think of how to tell you just how much you all mean to me, I am at A loss for words. YES, A loss for words. So....... THANK-YOU..!!

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Vautaw

Sat 5th Dec 2020 17:12

You have penned a poem of love and friendship we all long for. Adding this one to my favorites. Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul JD. ❤️

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 5th Dec 2020 16:48

Lovely poem.

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Dec 2020 23:29

I have read this poem several times because it merits closer appreciation. It speaks of a deep and abiding friendship in which two people can say I love you without it degenerating into something less noble. I raises the concept of love to a higher plane which is liberating and meaningful. I applaud this poem as a work of art which comes from a soul with the experience of true love untarnished and pure.

Thank you again JD
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Dec 2020 20:11

These words come from the heart of one who understands that love flowers out of friendship. The last three lines speak of commitment and love, a rare combination but a jewel in the crown of life.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Paul Sayer

Fri 4th Dec 2020 18:56

May these things come to manifest within your life.

It is so easy to forget when one is truly blessed how we take such things for granted.

Be Well
Paul.

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