a gull or an angle

a gull or an angel


watching a gull

catch an up current of air

higher and higher
until it was so small 
I could not see it

maybe it was an
angel returning home

or a gull who was
seeking freedom

wonder if gull knows

kris kristofferson’s

poem line

“freedoms just another

word for nothing left to lose”

or knows jonathan l. seagul

who loved to fly

was a loner and visionary

who had to find himself


he learned love and

returned to the flock


that expelled him

to share his new gained wisdom


but was it freedom?


the sound of the sun ►


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clyde McCulley

Tue 29th Sep 2020 02:59

Thanks Paul.
I am new to writing poetry and I appreciate your comments on this and on "earlids" in Sound of the Sun.

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