PALM TO PALM, SKIN TO SKIN

Touch...

betrays all that I try to hide

Touch...

soothes the turmoil inside

Touch...

takes my breath away

Touch...

gives me hope for another day

Touch...

reveals desires I have forgotten and were dormant

Touch...

offers what I need and all that I want

Touch...

awakens a passion I so desperately want to indulge in

Touch...

pacifies my suffering. 

 

◄ DUALITY AT PLAY (inner monologue of a childhood sexual abuse survivor)

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Flavia Gordon

Tue 15th Sep 2020 10:48

Hello Penguin,
Thank you so much for your constructive feefback. I agree and have made the changes.
I appreciate the like and welcome any and all feedback you may have in future.xx

penguin

Tue 15th Sep 2020 09:56

Nice final line.

reveals wants I have forgotten and was dormant - I think desires would be better than wants, you've "want" in the following line. Also, "were dormant" is more correct.

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