Touch...
betrays all that I try to hide
Touch...
soothes the turmoil inside
Touch...
takes my breath away
Touch...
gives me hope for another day
Touch...
reveals desires I have forgotten and were dormant
Touch...
offers what I need and all that I want
Touch...
awakens a passion I so desperately want to indulge in
Touch...
pacifies my suffering.
Hello Penguin,
Thank you so much for your constructive feedback. I agree and have made the changes.
I appreciate the like and welcome any and all feedback you may have in future.xx
Nice final line.
reveals wants I have forgotten and was dormant - I think desires would be better than wants, you've "want" in the following line. Also, "were dormant" is more correct.
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Flavia Gordon
Sun 20th Sep 2020 06:39
Tom, Neressa, Vautaw, Stephen and Julie I am happy you read and liked. Very much appreciated. xx