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THE MAGPIE

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A re-post from my Greatest Hits Volume 1 collection to mark the start, meteorologically speaking, of Autumn.

 

The scene was a canvas autumnal

Not yet with crimson and gold,

The swirl of the dead leaves so pitiful,

Life’s paucity there to behold;

When adding itself to the monochrome

Of the blacks and whites and the greys

Came hopping along a lone magpie,

Out of the mist and the haze;

Hopping along, hopping along, the way that they usually would,

Every bit the thief we expect and, as like as not, up to no good.

 

It bounded its way to the feeder post

Where blue tits and chaffinches fed,

A bully among the little kids;

The smaller birds startled and fled;

He watches them dart to the hedgerows,

Where once was the chance of a meal

By taking the Springtime eggs of the birds

From nests they tried to conceal;

Taking the eggs, breaking the eggs, as horror unfurled on the lawn,

The mother bird watching its child being killed, eaten before it was born.

 

Just then a shard of a sunbeam teems

Its warmth to the grass and the soil,

The magpie’s new irridescence shows

The colours of water and oil;

The sunlight reveals a different hue -

Tinctures of blue and of green,

Just being itself as God made it -

A brilliance under its sheen;

Being itself, true to itself, and not as often inferred,

But killing as nature intended it to, oh beautiful, beautiful bird.

◄ THE CONTOUR LEGACY LEG PILLOW

COOPEY'S GROUPIES ►

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 18:37

Thankyou, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Sep 2020 17:30

A really good poem, with a wonderful final couplet.

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 14:18

You’d certainly need more than a brace, Graham. It’s 4 for a boy so I reckon a growed man would need at least half a dozen. But be careful - they’re of the Corvid family.
And thanks for the comments and Likes, Paul, Don, Flavia, Brian and Julie.

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:29

Good idea Graham. They usually hang around as a family.....

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:26

Surely you need a brace of 'em? One for sorrow, two for joy etc etc. There's not a lot of meat on the legs!

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:24

Do you boil or fry it Brian?.....

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 10:01

Not Jack Hargreaves, Graham. John Betjeman’s “A Shropshire Lad”.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=-jnT4tOl_qQ
Mid-table, I’m afraid. Levy won’t part with enough brass for us to refresh.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 4th Sep 2020 09:38

I detect a touch of the late Jack Hargreaves in this. Are you related JC?

So here we go again eh? Another winter of discontent beckons. Up the Spurs (said breathlessly)

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Sep 2020 08:51

Thankyou for your thoughts, Flavia. I suspect we progress technologically but not anthropologically. Our imperatives are exactly the same now as they were 100,000 years ago.
I couldn’t say, Brian. I can’t catch the bloody things.

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 07:19

I bloody love magpie John...tastes like chicken!

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Flavia Gordon

Fri 4th Sep 2020 01:34

Simply wonderful John Coopey!
And beautifully read.

Makes me ponder on human nature, and how much of the chaos and upheaval we call our lives since the beginning of our existence can be attributed to it.

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