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the poetess

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She gives good head, the poetess

because her mouth is full of poems

and her inspiration is love.

Words spill out of her when she comes.

Her breasts are a rhyming couplet.

 

The poetess is good in bed,

her pillows are full of soft vowels

and her eiderdown’s a sonnet.

 

“Make me rhyme” she says.

“Show me a good time”

(for her poems are not very good today.)

 

“Lay me on the blank sheet,

and write I love you

all over my pale skin.”

she says.

 

Her foreplay is a tidal wave of adjectives,

she holds the pen firmly,

she makes the page her own

and every time she makes love

it’s a poem.

 

 

 

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Anthony Emmerson

Thu 27th May 2010 22:59

Hi Ann,

And thanks for visiting "Neil." There seems to quite a lot of "sensual" stuff being penned by you ladies at the moment. Are they putting something in the water?

Just one small query - What's "foreplay?" ;-)

I always feel I ought to be trying to write something erotic from the male perspective, but haven't managed it yet. Women are so much better at it.

Regards,
A.E.

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 27th May 2010 22:14

a mouthful of poems...
come now...
... you don't expect me to swallow that, do you?

Seriously though this poem, which is good, could have , in my opinion, been superb if you had edited it a few times over.

Take your time... your work is worth it.

Gusxx

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Isobel

Thu 27th May 2010 16:36

Banksy - you're obviously with the wrong woman!

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Thu 27th May 2010 00:56

"Her breasts are a rhyming couplet"

Probably the best line of poetry I have came across in my time on this site.

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Chris Dawson

Wed 26th May 2010 23:36

Really like this - fourth verse particularly! though maybe take out the quotation marks and she says?
Well done.
Cx

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Wed 26th May 2010 22:45

every time I make love it's a haiku these days....

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Isobel

Wed 26th May 2010 22:36

I love this Ann - all of it. You pretty much sum us female poets up - we love with body and soul - and words are just so important.

The ending is perfect!

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 26th May 2010 22:12

This may be better without the third and forth verses. But as I hate making decisions I left them in! Maybe because they make her seem like a real person I wanted to keep them in there. xx

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