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Idling evening on the terrace

watching the light on the bay

saw a swirling whirl of wings

zigging, zagging, desperately spiralling

up down over round and above.

A ravenous rapacious raptor

chasing a frightened fledgling.

Just when all seemed lost

the victim, as a last resort,

dived under the table, and crouched

quivering, heart thumping visibly

half dead  with sheer terror.

 

The fierce-eyed predator

hungrily perched  on the gutter,

ready to swoop yet again,

then ever  impatient, soared off dinnerless

deprived of a choice tidbit.

 

The tiny creature collapsed,seemingly lifeless

but left undisturbed, much later

took off unsteadily, straight to the safe haven

of a sheltering lemon grove.

David had at least outwitted Goliath.

 

 

 

 

◄ A visit to Vulcan

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 9th Jul 2020 21:09

The primordial activities never cease to attract human attention. Watching a hawk pursuing a prey is awe inspiring. Why do majority hope the kill ends in failure?

Well described Jennifer.

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