A Mighty Word

A word to learn

A word to teach

A word to speak

A word to shield

A word to give

A word to take

A word to make

A word to frame

A word to smile

A word to sulk

A word to guard

A word to shed

A word to hold

A word to hope

A word to float

A word to drown

A word to boost

A word to ruin

A word to honour 

A word to sin

A word to blame

A word to tame

A word to love

A word to hate

It takes a word to do it all

A word as sword 

Can slaughter a soul

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:53

Adam i will surely keep your point in mind.
Thanks

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:52

Thank you for commenting on my work
Ak

Anna

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:27

How true.

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Adam Whitworth

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:02

Hi Anmolpreet,

I've seen some of your poetry and know it is good.

I'm sorry to say this one does not appeal to me at all.

As soon as I saw it was "A word to..." all the way down I was appalled. However wonderful the sentiments, a poem with such a style can only be disappointing.

Just my personal opinion on one poem, I think the exact opposite of Abdul.

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 10:53

Ak this is a magnificient use of a single word to produce a magical poem. It is simply elegant.

<Deleted User> (25973)

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 08:40

Meaningful and true!

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