A word to learn
A word to teach
A word to speak
A word to shield
A word to give
A word to take
A word to make
A word to frame
A word to smile
A word to sulk
A word to guard
A word to shed
A word to hold
A word to hope
A word to float
A word to drown
A word to boost
A word to ruin
A word to honourÂ
A word to sin
A word to blame
A word to tame
A word to love
A word to hate
It takes a word to do it all
A word as swordÂ
Can slaughter a soul
Thank you for commenting on my work
Ak
Anna
Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:27
How true.
Hi Anmolpreet,
I've seen some of your poetry and know it is good.
I'm sorry to say this one does not appeal to me at all.
As soon as I saw it was "A word to..." all the way down I was appalled. However wonderful the sentiments, a poem with such a style can only be disappointing.
Just my personal opinion on one poem, I think the exact opposite of Abdul.
Ak this is a magnificient use of a single word to produce a magical poem. It is simply elegant.
<Deleted User> (25973)
Tue 23rd Jun 2020 08:40
Meaningful and true!
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Anmolpreet Kaur
Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:53
Adam i will surely keep your point in mind.
Thanks