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Ann Foxglove

Mon 10th May 2010 08:04

Really beautifully read, and seeing your elfin face reading gave it a delicate haunting quality.

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Francine

Sun 9th May 2010 20:57

I enjoyed listening to you Max...
I take the sibilances to reflect the wind sighing. Your very slight voice variations, along with your chosen words, create a bit of a disturbed and hypnotic state.

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Max Wallis

Sun 9th May 2010 20:42

:)

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Chris Dawson

Sun 9th May 2010 20:33

In that case - use it! Vary the pitch, tone etc ... make it a performance - trust me, I do know what I'm talking about here. :)
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Max Wallis

Sun 9th May 2010 20:30

Chris I do know what you mean but also it's deliberate. The poem's more about the softer sibilances than 'z's.

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Chris Dawson

Sun 9th May 2010 20:28

Beautiful voice Max, just watch the sibilance on certain words ending in s ... sighs, exercise ... unless the sibilance is deliberate (and if it is - use it - strengthen it - and vary it, to add interest) try saying sighz, exercize etc instead - it sounds better in performance - play with it a bit, you should be able to hear what I mean. Well done though.
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