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CYCLICAL LAWS

The astrophysicist climbs onto the bike

he inherited from his father,

moves off in obedience to certain laws,

pondering on the longevity of the tyres

also inherited, along with a parsimony

based on the principles of conservation

observable in all matter.

 

The tyres need changing

but being a reluctant optimist

he reserves himself for more cosmic considerations

 

and

dismounting at the corner shop

props up the bike by one pedal against the kerb

as his father would have done.

 

Should it be stolen

he would be devastated,

but the anticipation of it eludes him,

his head being buffeted by solar winds

and his soul possessed by deep space.

◄ DAMNED POETRY

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raypool

Thu 30th Apr 2020 14:18

Cheers Jon. It cheers me up to see poets delving back and commenting. A bit of an odd one, but it seemed to get interest!

Ray

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Jon

Thu 30th Apr 2020 09:09

Hi Ray
A really interesting read. I especially loved the second and the last stanza.
Jon

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raypool

Sat 25th Apr 2020 22:34

Hi Keith. I'm glad you could relate to this and identify with its aspects. Thanks.

Yes Po. I think the wheel is a common feature in the conception of space time etc. Being at the centre or on the rim is a favourite image of mine. Thanks.

Thanks Greg. I missed that, but i'll try on catch up. Yes, my juices are starting to flow - well not all of them obviously!

Graham, There is a very therapeutic aspect to cycling; I always find that, and with a destination to enjoy too sounds great. My neighbour was the brother of a guy who cycled 1 million miles(it was on the national news a few month back.)

Thank you for liking it, Jeannot.

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 25th Apr 2020 10:51

I like the Zen apects of this piece Ray, the awareness of one's surroundings and condition. Reminds me of cycling with my father to go fishing; another Zen-like pastime.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 25th Apr 2020 09:34

Good to see you back in the saddle, Ray. Very good programme on the Hubble telescope on BBC2 last night, btw.

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keith jeffries

Fri 24th Apr 2020 21:40

Concurrent thoughts ranging from the mundane to the academic. This is a poem, the content of which, I similarly indulge in: and I thought I was a little odd.

A very good poem John.
Thank you for this

Keith

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