thanks for your kind comments on 'Manhattan Morning' Josie - I'm really pleased that you liked it
Ian
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Fri 22nd Mar 2019 01:29
you tipped your toe
in the water
now dive in with both feet
the water is as deep
as you want to make it
write on!
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Hey Josie
you have tipped your toe in the water. keep going, as has been said you have posted a couple of fine poems. I look forward to reading more.
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Frances Macaulay Forde
Tue 19th Mar 2019 02:58
I agree with Jason, Josie.
I have enjoyed both of your poems... I am very sure there are many more worthy words to read, so please share.
And keep writing!
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Morning Josie,
Much like you, I've written all my life but only poetry. I've never shared before because I didn't want to or just didn't know how, but trust me, be confident, write, share, no-one will judge and if they do, balls to them. It feels good to finally put stuff out there just so it's heard and for me, if it's good that's great and if it's not that's fine too.
Your friends have it right. Write, share, be bold and enjoy it, (also check out Lisa Donohoe, lovely honest and heartfelt).
By the way, absolutely love your sample, genuinely!?
Jason.
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Martin Peacock
Sat 8th Jun 2019 14:55
This is a good poem, Josie. There's a maturity to it which belies your tyro status. Nicely.
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