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Sun 18th Oct 2020 02:54
Thank you HayzTee
your spelling drives me crazy
but I think that it is mainly
that thing on your lip
that pains me.
Comment is about HayzTee (Hayley) (poet profile)
Original item by HayzTee (Hayley)
Thu 16th May 2019 16:32
Finally making progress with my manuscript, *if* it is accepted by a publishing firm, It will be surrounding mental health, as I feel passionately about expressing the battles we face and providing a voice to those who struggle.
Fingers crossed this ends up going well.
Even if not, I will never give up writing and aiming to become a voice for those in need! ?
Thank you to everyone who reads my work, those who comment with feedback, and those who express fondness in the terms of a "like". Being part of this community has helped me grow, develop confidence in my work, and aspire to get to this point where I am finally trying to finalise an Anthology/Pamphlet on mental health!
Sun 30th Dec 2018 20:48
I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your page. The art, the poems and the spoken word tracks. You are of many talents and its hard not to appreciate them as a whole.
Keep on, keeping on ?
Tue 25th Sep 2018 06:29
Hayley Thankyou for your comments you sound very much like me when younger only one parent and ill health most of my life my mum worked all her life full time in the mills and then Altzimers for 25 years . with not much education I had to just get on with things could never spell until iPad now look at me lots more to come well done love wendyx
Fri 10th Aug 2018 15:05
Stay strong and feel better.?
Fri 3rd Aug 2018 22:54
Since you asked, in my humble opinion, I think the 3 best poems you have submitted to the site are these ones, in descending order:
1. "The demons that only I knew"
2. "Who are the real Monsters?"
3. "Friends of many faces"
Of course others on here may feel differently, these are the three pieces that I read over the most because of their interest, their powerful words, and their interesting topics. The first one I put I think so because it packs so much in such short lines, and I still think it is one of the best ones I've read in a while. The second poem I put because I've yet to read a poem like it anywhere. The care you put shows. The third poem is on there because the way the repetitive usage of the word 'friend' is applied adds a unique rhythm unlike any other that you've done so far. Hope this advice helps in some way, have a good one Hayley, and keep up the great poems.?
Fri 3rd Aug 2018 21:10
I need some assistance. I'm considering putting a poem as an entry to a big competition due date in August.
What poem/poems do you think are my strongest or most powerful and are worthy of potentially winning a brilliant prize maybe?
I need help to narrow it down and I'm very overloaded with options?
Thu 2nd Aug 2018 14:07
Looking forward to it.
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Mon 30th Jul 2018 21:17
Thank you Hayley for all the 'likes'. I'm glad you like my paper collages.?
Fri 27th Jul 2018 19:02
Nice to meet you Hayley! I'm glad you liked "Feel the Rhythm". I look forward to reading through your poems. Jane?
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