Your Alpaca poem warms my heart!

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You have such an interesting writing style Adam, and cover so many topics and aspects of life! Keep writing. 😃

Best wishes,
Rasa

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That poem was written in praise of shopping carts
not to criticize them or point out their failures.
God knows there is enough negativity already.
We should uplift each other and...uplift our shopping carts.
Where would we be without them?
(by the way, where did you come from? Not seen your name
before. Are you a regular or irregular?
?

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Hey Adam sorry to disappoint you but i would like if you could review my other work as well.
And i will admire if you judge truly just like you did with a mighty word.
Ak

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Footfalls echo in the memory
Down the passage which we did not take
Towards the door we never opened
Into the rose-garden. My words echo
Thus, in your mind.
But to what purpose
Disturbing the dust on a bowl of rose-leaves
I do not know. BURNT NORTON

Thank you Adam for your support. Eliot was, and is, right. Poetry is not cut up prose and doesn't enter our minds, hearts and souls by the same route prose takes.

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Hi Adam Glad you liked my Joni poem! I bet you picked up the reference to the Blue album in the middle stanzas.

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Hi, Adam,I really enjoyed your excellent comment on 'VE Day, 2020'. And I've considered it a lot. I finally think it was the 'sound element' that dictated the word order, the slight 'mmm' of both words beginning and ending the 'idea', almost like a bracket, kind of a 'thoughtful' sound. 'War'' is a difficult vocallization to start a line. But that order has more 'elegance', I absolutely agree. Not to mention correct grammar.

Cynthia

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Thank you so much for your comment on my poem! I'm new to the site so really appreciate the support ?
Maria

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At the Graveside - thanks for looking in Adam. ?

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Thanks for looking in on Wartime Merseyside Adam. Appreciated. P. ?

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That quotation of T.S. Elliot is superb.

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Hello Adam, thanks for reading and liking 'If It Started This Christmas', much appreciated. Dave

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Hi Richard,

Yes I did like The Last Train and I'd be keen to read more of your poetry. There is a wide variety of poetry on this site to enjoy and some of it is even pretty good!

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Hi Adam
Thankyou for 'Liking' my poem ('The Last Train').
I confess that I was wondering whether anybody on this website ever read the poems written and presented by others from outside their usual orbit!
You have re-assuerd me - thankyou.
Richard

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