Hi Michelle

Thanks for your note on Bathtime.

It's a deeply unpleasant memory from childhood that has plagued me for years. I thought to try and exorcise it through poetry. Stu's take is close to the real thing.

Cheers

Laura

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Hi Michelle, thanks for reading & commenting on 'shut up...'. I always appreciate your comments, and agree with your observation about religion not being able to accommodate passion (particularly if that passion is expressed by a woman), at least in my experience, which I admit isn't extensive :)

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Michelle, I would stop making comments completely if I considered them to be 'reviews'. Where would I get the crust? I like the idea of talking together, informally, and often helpfully. Anyone can take my own work apart totally, which has happened frequently, to my delight and improvement. I always consider the points or options suggested and do make relevant changes.

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Very evocative and warm Michelle. Captures the moment and metaphor for companiosnship / comfort so well.

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Hi Michelle, thanks for commenting on dismantled. The violin string but is my favourite too. I'm not to sure what this one means, sometimes they become clearer to me with time, thanks again x

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Hi Michelle, thanks so much for your beautiful comments, I'm so glad that you enjoy my stuff, it really does mean a lot xx

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Hi Michelle, welcome to WOL, just been reading a few of your poems, good stuff, you will have to treat us to a rendition at WOL!

Anyway, keep up the good work, thanks for reading 'It doesn't sit right' have to have a good rant now and again! :-)

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Thank you. Kind of you.My day a bit hectic, making lots of fresh starts and tying up ends.

Will read some of your poetry soon :)

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holding hands is excellent. a really descriptive snapshot of an intimate moment that belies a far greater meaning. pure poetry!

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Work in progress, snap

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Hi Michelle, thanks for commenting on Who Would? We obviously think alike, you pretty much nailed what I was trying to get at :) x

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Hi Michelle, thanks for reading & commenting on my stuff, I appreciate it, and welcome :) x

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Warm welcome Michelle.Enjoy! x

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Thank you for your comment Michelle. Writing seams to be the best outlet for me. Unfortunately my muse always comes from heartbreak or disappointment. I really enjoyed your poem 'Holding Hands' ...I can relate to that also.

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