Thank you so much for the feedback Tom!

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I like this David. I think the 3rd line could do with some attention but otherwise it's a strong piece.

Don - that is a good question? Bitterness leads to cruelty in my experience, but what causes bitterness?

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I like the way you use words David. It raises the question do we possess a cruelty gene? Born with one?.....

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A strong poem about an important issue that we see a lot of at the moment.

Hannah

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