I found it necessary to read this poem a few times to absorb the atmosphere it generated. It is filled with a deep sense of melancholy which although sad has a peculiar beauty with it. You paint a picture which to my mind accentuated the entire purpose of your writing it. I hope this makes sense as I enjoyed it and found it to be very real.
Thank you for this
Keith
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Original item by Pyrola
Pyrola
Tue 14th May 2019 11:39
Dear Keith, thank you for your comment on this poem. I got very happy from this, since you managed to capture my feelings in a few lines.
Comment is about on the balcony (blog)
Original item by Pyrola