great dialogue piece. liked it. Win

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The voice sounds like it is some sort of Jinn.. a wish made for... and subsequently the wisher is unsure... of course I am probably wrong. Keep up the 'Tossing off' you two.......;-)
TC X

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i like this cynthia in particular to crossroads and then in the next stanza - t junction.. clever stuff..

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Cynthia, I am sure you could never sound like a twit! And all my poems are "toss-offs" as you call them. The only one I've ever planned out was South with Endurance, and no one seemed very struck with it. Regarding this poem, not sure if I quite get it. Half way through I thought you were having an argument with your SAT NAV. But I guess that's a metaphor, or the road of life is. Will read it a few more times. But thanks for all your comments, esp recent one for Mon Girl.

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I am so divided about the value of 'toss-offs' being posted before a period of 'settling' has passed, for further consideration of ideas and expressions. I'm messing around too. This is my third effort at relative spontaneity.

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