Thanks Ray. I like to think there is virtue in keeping the
essence of a poem short and leaving with something that
stays in the mind. Life is so often about what is not said
or done, isn't it?
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One of your finest offerings Mark in my opinion . Simple and affecting. Nuances like this have great effects on futures and are often buried alive along with the better class of dreams.
Ray
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Thanks one and all for the kind comments and for taking
the trouble to "like" this poem.
MC
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That last line made me shiver! Great stuff!
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patricia Hughes
Wed 9th Aug 2017 17:47
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Fri 8th Sep 2017 12:46
Powerful revelation. A poem that stays in the mind.
Thanks so much for your comment on my poem The Letter.
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