Thanks

Comment is about Time to Rhyme and Say Hello (blog)

Original item by Susan Greene

Susan,
I came upon this just after having had another look at Joy France`s `Loyalty` advert poem.

I was comparing Joy`s to your last one (which is more a remembrance and contemplation upon a childhood event)

I was impressed at how rhyme helps both to `come home`and how Joys style of `delivery` (which is very much her own) helps her poem to `work` so much.

Both have made think of what `poetic` intonation is in modern conditions of performance.

(I`ts only me rambling on as usual ?)

Comment is about Time to Rhyme and Say Hello (blog)

Original item by Susan Greene

Frivolous and fun! Who hasn't occasionally found themselves in the same situation on WOL? It made me
smile and that's always welcome.

Comment is about Time to Rhyme and Say Hello (blog)

Original item by Susan Greene