Andromeda
Wed 4th Jan 2017 00:17
I really like this. As always your work is simple, breathless, but powerful.
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Thanks Paul for reading & the nice comment...& the ice-cream part is of course true....she still calls me vanilla & herself chocolate...first date, nice memory of the occasion....Jeff...
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Hi Jeff, this poem says so much about racism. I liked the touch of humour about ice-cream, it speaks volumes about the character of the couple. Paul
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Thanks Andy & glad you took the time to read......Jeff...
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Love this poem, its construction of 3 line verses and the message that it tells. A great start to 2017.
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Thanks Raj. The sad thing is the comment are true, this is what people have told me...incredible! The ice-cream part is also true....we're still laughing, unlike the commenters...Jeff...
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I enjoyed that Jeff. Beautifully expressed.
Remember Ebony & Ivory rendered straight from the heart by Paul & Stevie?
Please read my One Universal Tribe.
Happy 2017 ?
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Gideon Puccio
Wed 4th Jan 2017 01:52
Well written Jeff... Love this poem. Very powerful and meaningful and the ice cream made me chuckle as well. Great work...
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