do like this, matey in particular the first stanza here.. it's possibly a bit long for my tastes, as i wonder whether a bit of editing may make it sharper but i totally agree with your message.. A
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Andy N
Sun 5th Feb 2012 13:38
do like this, matey in particular the first stanza here.. it's possibly a bit long for my tastes, as i wonder whether a bit of editing may make it sharper but i totally agree with your message.. A
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