This is lovely Tomás...
I can only relate to this in that I do not divulge all that I feel...

As I am sure you know now - it is better to let your feelings be known than to live with wonder and regret...

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Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hi Tomas, I can really identify with this and either you didn't ask, or you did something wrong, the result is the same. It's difficult to move on but hopefully we get there. It's a wonderful poem and very clever use of words, nice one, Jeff

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Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hello Tomas

"Better love and lost then never have love at all"
Your poem shows a lot of feelings and emotions. The lost love hurts quite long time, perhaps all life? If it was a true love the heart feels the loss.
You have done excellent job writing about unrequited love.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

I think most of us have loved and lost at some stage, but then what would we have to write about? I like this.
ps. thanks for your advice, i might just give it a try. Janet.x

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Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

I think we all have someone in our past we sometimes come back to and think ... "if only". Mine was a girl call Fiona.. or Foggie to her friends. Perhaps she stumple on this blog one day and message me by return.

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Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh