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Picking up a broken mirror...

I cup the head, falling down, posing as beautiful thought, suspended and capitalised, and not really anything, and flash the adornments as they are - grappling feigning arms of grace and wisdom; scratching, shivering out, rehearsed, and a lie. I have never met an I so diluted with others, so empathetic, so swamped with surrogate liability,  that the population swims in my palm,  irrespective of cuts and infections and rents a debt like an open space, filling up by emptying out, spreading skin like lace, publishing a wedding for kin, a sandal to the spokes, spun round by an army as flippant as a breeze…

…saving the flag…

                        that is clear…with thin lines of a face - a polythene stretch waiting for a fruit basket, and a pellucid barnacle for any axis-  and, no, never has such a passport obliged and banished so smugly. Breaking my heart with its kaleidoscope, it bears my ruby tears like a martyr and I wish it would fuck off.

◄ In the shadow of silence.

M.E.E Coming ►

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winston plowes

Thu 22nd Apr 2010 02:11

if this is free writing, it just shows how brilliant you are Ms Daniels :-) Win x

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Wed 14th Apr 2010 15:47

I am violently in love with Andre Breton (!) and like to dabble in abit of free writing, take an idea and just go with it. I find it very cathartic.
Thanks for the comments.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 14th Apr 2010 14:52

Very original, and compelling. Much to absorb and unravel. It seems quite different from your 'usual' in choice of diction and format. Was the 'prose' approach to disguise its length?

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