Superficial burns.
Now you're not here,
my wounds can heal
and the scorch marks
of your twisted lust
will fade.
And so will you.
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Comments
nice change here, kathyn not in content which i enjoyed again but the shortness off it.. nice change in tempo! x
I thought this was going to be some sort of comedy Robert Burns thing. Instead it was absolutey wonderful
I agree with Stef. Such an immediate and powerful poem. I'm sure poetry helps to heal us all. xx
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 11th Apr 2010 18:53
Jeez Kath,one deep indelible scar here-dont want to insult you by saying forget it-but if you could lessen the thought,you might give yourself a chance to get back to life(I mean that respectfully)it was once said'you can,t change things,so why regret them-as for me,re an abuser in my family-once every month I travel to the cemetery,to his grave,clean the headstone and lay flowers-to judge other people,it comes down to the old'those without sin throw the first stone'scenario.Any who trys to bullshit you in that respect? (yeah right!)dont carry it too long-gets heavier! bloody hell! you got me waffling again! catch you later-hope you enjoyed your day with family-Stef-x
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Marc Lovett
Mon 12th Apr 2010 22:32
Find your labyrinth of chosen words a fulfilling read.Impulsive expressions,and strong values.Inspirational.