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Climbing up the Walls

You discover them

one by one

climbing up the walls

searching for something to satisfy their hunger

 

They gather there

smelling the sweetness calling them

they see their chance

a long journey has taken place

 

Will they reach their target

or will they be wiped out

only to start over again

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kimberly

Thu 19th Dec 2019 05:36

Thanks, Don. Glad you enjoyed it. ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 19th Dec 2019 05:17

I knew it was about ants. Wanted to push my mind for other scenarios via my characters.

Forgetting Ethel and Bert, this was a clever, well-thought-out poem Mika. I enjoyed it

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kimberly

Thu 19th Dec 2019 05:11

True story, inspired by ants but could relate to so much more!

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Don Matthews

Thu 19th Dec 2019 04:21

Wot's this all about Eth?

Ants luv.....Obviously

Why not those people who climb Evrest?.....

No pet.....ants

If you say so Eth....

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