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Out of body

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You know that you are having

An out of body experience

When you find

Your heart and your mind

In a different place

To where you physically

Are

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◄ Solstice state of mind

The gift of words ►

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Don Matthews

Mon 16th Dec 2019 04:58

Eth?....

Yes luv....

Wot's going on 'ere?... outa body? .. OBE? Isn't that Order of the British Empire or something?

Go back to sleep luv....

Snore.......

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 15th Dec 2019 22:56

Don you have that special jar of poetry writing pixie dust we're all after. Janet keeps it safe and well hidden on the space ship.

Nigel I said 'Hello' to you in your dreams last night ....unfortunately I then zapped you with my special pen and now you don't remember!

Thank you Po I always enjoy your well informed comments. I have a Diploma in Dream Therapy, and during that course there was lectures on this theory that we die every night.

I'd also like think that a part of all us writers of poetry and thoughts are connected by a silver thread of consciousness... and I'm quite sure that we are!

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Don Matthews

Sun 15th Dec 2019 22:36

Eff?....

Yes luv....

Po says I die every night....

So?.....

Why do I wake up each morning then?.....

An' wot's this about a silver cord Eff?

It's that umblical thing you had danging from you when were born luv....

Oh?... you're a walking cyclopedia Eff........

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Nigel Astell

Sat 14th Dec 2019 15:17

Spirits can enter dreams
just to say hello
mind and body awaken
heart felt memories retraced
but you don't know why.

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Don Matthews

Sat 14th Dec 2019 03:22

My heart is in my body
My mind is in the air
Janet's saying blip..blip
Whatever is that there?

Don't panic pilot Janet
Your spaceship's not on course
Collision-wise with my mind
Which would make matters worse


What's 'e talking about Eff?....

Dunno luv. Seems he's off with the pixies....

I had a pixie visit me the other day Eff.....gave me daisies and a Tesco voucher....

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