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Ride Twice

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As a child, racing past the height post
eager to ride the roller coaster
there were those who'd jostle in the queue
to sit at the very front
with an uninterrupted view of what was coming
no obstruction to the beauty
of the madness
afforded by that ride
to see it all and see it first
filling up their eyes

And there were those of us who’d choose the back seats
secretly knowing that was where 
the full forces were exacted
you'd be plucked and shook
thrown around the wildest
tears sucked from smiling eyes, stomach hung and dropped
with only fleeting glimpses 
of what was happening
you felt every movement
magnified a thousand times

Given the chance
I'd ride the roller coaster twice
once to see
and once to feel

O, won’t you let me
ride twice
once for the beauty
and once again 
to really feel it...

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 20:50

To me, bouncing off each other is an important part of being a poet.....enjoy the ride

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Tom

Thu 12th Dec 2019 16:05

Don Don Don
thanks
for the inspiration
on this one

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 11:19

Up 'n' down
Stomach goes
All your fault
Ride you chose

Front or back
Makes no diff
You chose ride
Sorry, stiff

What's that you say?
Help let me off?
Cos in my tum's
Beef stroganoff

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