widow
love was never smooth
tenderness and anger bind
now there are ashes
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Oh Stef, how sweet you are to defend me but I didn't mind John's comment. We mud-maids are used to this kind of personal abuse! xx
<Deleted User> (7164)
Sun 4th Apr 2010 13:47
I love the Haiku and to bring life and death and human frailties together on one has my vote for a good one.
:-)
Ann
I'm not the greatest fan of haikus but I really like the sentiment. I think Stafan's nailed it "bitter-sweet". Just noticed though - I think your bush could do with a trim!
Keep posting.
In heaven maybe? ;-) xx
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Francine
Sun 4th Apr 2010 17:00
Very moving... so true.
Joyeuses Pâques : )
xxx