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The Woman at My Table

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The woman at my table

by Tommy Carroll

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She possesses watched eyes

and is unaware of the conspiracy

that stirrs in my head.

She is uninformed by

her Secret Service

as to my machinations

and my plots to steal

with quiet looks

and compelling reason

the why and wherefore

of her each

and every day.

 

Words and foto T carroll

 

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 9th Nov 2019 17:26

Ray you are correct. I stand corrected. Correction is the side-street to drunken doorways.

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raypool

Fri 8th Nov 2019 17:01

I love the compelling romance of this Tommy, a style you do so well. A nice twist of observational science. Is that first line ok or should it read possesses? I hope so.

Ray

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