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The woman at my table

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She posses watched eyes

and is unaware of the conspiracy

that stirrs my head.

She is uninformed by

her Secret Service

as to my machinations

and my plots to steal

with quiet looks

and compelling reason

the why and wherefore

of her each

and every day.

 

Words and foto T carroll

◄ The Complainant's Complaint

After the leaving ►

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 4th Aug 2013 23:11


I like the strikingly original analogy of those first four stanzas.

The last stanza effects me but I can`t say why
(I think it`s to do with that word `but`)

I don`t care what anyone else thinks...It`s a love poem.

By the way, I liked your play on `complaint` in the last one.

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