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Heart Seeds

I leave such little pieces

Of my heart for all to keep

I drop them as I walk my path

And bury them down deep

To plant the seed of open eyes

In hopes that they will hear

And Shatter their illusions

Their anxieties and fears

 

 

-I could have waited and tried to revise it, I feel as though it's unfinished, but these days I rarely get around to revising anything.

◄ Last one tonight- Calm thoughts free verse

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 6th Nov 2019 10:51

The more seeds dropped,
the more love grown,
the closer to becoming complete and whole.
This poem is fine as it stands,
crafted with thought and loving hands.
Passed along to quell the fear
of all who need love far and near.

<Deleted User> (22444)

Wed 6th Nov 2019 10:38

Well it was worth throwing out there. A lovely naivety to this. ?

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