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The eleventh hour, of the eleventh day, of the eleventh month

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These long, black evenings fill me with premonitions,

The falling of the leaves remind us of our losses.

Captain Wilfred Owen killed in action 

During the crossing of the Sambre–Oise Canal

One week (almost to the hour) before the signing of the Armistice. 

Such terrifying bloomings of a malignant fate,

A godless irony, force us back into our centrally heated caves.

We dream only of warmth, food, sleep.

Dozing in a blue-haze

Of guilty imaginings,

We experience survivors guilt: blood up to the hilt. 

Routine cushions the incursions of bitter reality for a while

Until the instress of the dead 

Settles like a swamp inside my head.

These eleventh hour remembrances freeze the daily bustle

Make an epiphany of our wasted minutes, hours, years.

Gloom settles like a blanket as the clock strikes eleven

Rain brings a Golgotha darkness at noon

As birds scavenge these empty streets..

At the memorial, the only flower is the bloody poppy,

Pinned onto the jackets of the few,remaining men

Their spirits bruised but never broken.

 

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keith jeffries

Wed 30th Oct 2019 09:53

John,

Thank you for your comment. Sassoon´s poem "The Menin Gate" although brief speaks volumes of those who died in the most appalling circumstances and the futlility of war. When I stand at the town war memorial every year my mind goes to those who took their own lives and those shot for desertion or cowardice. Bless all their hearts.

Thank you
Keith

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John Marks

Tue 29th Oct 2019 23:10

Thank you Keith. You write from lived experience and thus I value your words immensely. Wilfred Owen's friend and mentor, Siegfried Sassoon, illustated the chasm that exists between the civilian's sentimenalising of war and the soldier's lived experience of horror and futility in 'Suicide in the Trenches':


Suicide in the trenches:

I knew a simple soldier boy
Who grinned at life in empty joy,
Slept soundly through the lonesome dark,
And whistled early with the lark.

In winter trenches, cowed and glum
With crumps and lice and lack of rum,
He put a bullet through his brain.
No one spoke of him again.

* * * * *

You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye
Who cheer when soldier lads march by,
Sneak home and pray you'll never know
The hell where youth and laughter go.

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keith jeffries

Tue 29th Oct 2019 19:44

John,

appropriate and masterful in its significance. A poem worthy of the eleventh day. The line, " make an epiphany of our wasted minutes,hours and years" resonate with me as I recall those, much younger than I, who were never able to live the minutes, hours and years I have had the good fortune to live, thanks to their sacrifice.

Thank you for this

Keith

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