Bridge Of Forgiveness

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Building bridges out

of matchsticks

Crossing fragile miles

All so easily burnt

Gazing down

At

Murky waters

To

Drowning lessons

Learnt

forgiveness

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 12th Sep 2019 14:06

Beautifully written, succinct and so on point that it could outpoint the point of a pointy thing. The bridge is fragile, the waters are murky and flame flickers ever present.

J. x

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 12th Sep 2019 13:39

Tom Thanks so much for your kind comment

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Tom

Thu 12th Sep 2019 11:08

Love this Ruth, so few words say it all! Really great work.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 12th Sep 2019 10:29

Thanks for reading Don & Avishek!

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Thu 12th Sep 2019 09:23

Good write

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Don Matthews

Wed 11th Sep 2019 23:25

Clever....

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