Buzz
Miniature blimps
over fields of buds
bees become drones
with wings abuzz
their body shape
suggests a thud
yet nothing flies
like a bee does.
Comments
28 buzz's dk has given bee
He's therefore quite excited is he
Now don't no-one tell me I've counted them wrong
And that there is actually only 23
(You try counting them without going silly....)
Now why is this bee so excited?
You've guessed it, he's pumped up with sex
He's trying to get at the queenie
While buzzing midair's damn complex
He's gotta fight off all other buzzers
(We all know how hard that can be)
So thankyou dk for your adding
28 buzzes to my poetry
Or are there 27?.....?
Mon 9th Sep 2019 11:49
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Devon Brock
Mon 9th Sep 2019 21:57
Dk,
There is more here than meets the eye. In its brevity and lightness, you have captured the sense of overcoming what should, by all reason, be impossible.
D