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Watching for the beavers

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Out in the dull gold gloaming

past drowsy horses in cool wet grass

leaning on ancient mossy walls

of a long gone castle

looking down on the peat dark river

in still pools far below

with caramel colour foam

where rocks oppose its flow

the little burn gurgling gleefully

as it joins its older brother

 

a secret place - no roads or tracks

fishermen discouraged by steep banks

too many trees for fly casting

the dappled trout lying unworried

lazily keeping pace with the current

 

a quiet hardworking beaver family

its haven known to few supporters

unpopular through no fault of theirs

having been  unwittingly re-introduced

causing a flood last winter

as the saplings so laboriously felled

came down with the spate

damming the river and flooding the village

 

they only do what programmed to do

those poor busy little beavers

received with undeserved hostility

delighted in only by their few friends

 

 

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raypool

Thu 29th Aug 2019 11:46

Beautifully portrayed scene of activity, would be inspirational in itself as a setting and takes us right in to a sense of a backwater.
The issue resonates with other species that don't have our blessing like badgers and squirrels. I'm no expert in these matters but you present a good case! As another matter, I recall as a child Rupert the Bear and Teddy Tail (a vertical mouse) and identifying these various creatures as real people. In some ways it is a shame to have to grow up I feel.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Thu 29th Aug 2019 09:19

Thanks Devon and Jason for the comments, and Fish for the like. I can understand the farmers disliking them as in this area the rivers are small/medium size and the land is all cultivated so they have to be watched - there isn't the space there is for the American or Canadian ones who have vast areas in which to live with few inhabitants, but I feel a little sorry for them.
Thanks to Ray as well - glad you liked it! What is a vertical mouse? He stands on his back legs? I remember Rupert the Bear too!

Jennifer

Devon Brock

Wed 28th Aug 2019 21:45

Jennifer,

You have captured the place and its isolation beautifully. Beavers are such wonderful beasts. They create habitat for waterfowl, fish, reptiles, etc. If people would stop building on floodplains, there wouldn't be this issue.

D

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 28th Aug 2019 15:10

You paint such a lovely picture Jennifer, I for one am so glad to see beavers re-introduced to the British countryside.
It's an arrogance rarely rivalled that some humans think they know best how the world should be, and an ignorance rarely matched that they decide what's best for you and me.

J. x

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