symphony of love

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Shallow brains,gather loniness.Fear brings about a weak soul.we were one but you made us two....

Close your eyes and cry me a tune,,for you miss me but i never think of you.

Maybe i'm over thinking,or maybe its you,,maybe everything you talked about could be true.

Sometimes you never know what to expect ,sometimes it recks your inside.There is a space where a heart once belonged.

My first beat started pure,but something went wrong .Lush of cement rushes over....noo,noo!!! it pains worst than being sober.

Instead of saving me you betrayed me ,left me wrapped up in agony.Broken glass can always tell my story.

◄ The wrong step toward things?

Broken ►


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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 25th Aug 2019 17:18

There is a space where a heart once belonged is such a powerful line

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Thu 22nd Aug 2019 19:36

thank you Jason...

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 22nd Aug 2019 18:53

I really like poetry like this, it has a kind of, "Talking Heads," quality to it, if that reference makes sense, believe me it's a compliment. If you imagine one person talking direct down the camera lense. With the right words, it's extremely powerful, and I'd say these are the right words.

J. x

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